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Josserand One-Hand by Gisoreux de Ponthieu.
Just read this, and it's very good writing. I have a few criticisms, however, though minor:
• don't put speech in italics, but put thoughts into italics ... just my personal preference, but I find writing reads more naturally like that.
• I spotted a few punctuation errors, most notably a few commas instead of semi colons, and ' ...," ' instead of what I believe to be correct ' "..." '
• At the end, it is clear you implied some kind of sexual act, or at least them kissing:
"Her soft hands slowly caressed his shoulders, exploring and venturing deeper and deeper. Her lips were cold to the touch but tasted sweet. Josserand closed his eyes and didn’t open them again until the next morning. ". Leave that out. It's not necessary, and seems random, merely added because you felt like it ... it could fit, but not really when you're referring to the Fey Enchantress. Well written, but I feel it would be bettre without it.
A few very minor points, and otherwise very good ... your writing seems half-background, half-story, in its overall style which works very well and is very well written.
A fantastic read: I was hooked from the start. You're a very good writer, Gisoreux.