Re:Pierre La Or. The knighting of Jean. 9 Years, 1 Month ago
I like it. It has a sort of difference to it. I quite enjoy some of the takes on Bret vampires, though there's a distinct lck of massive scenes of carnage and the like, despite that fact that a lot of Bretonnian vampires are Blood Dragons.
'It is an abomination I hate myself for even mentioning, a dark tide responsible for every wrong of humanity. It is infinite and yet nonexistential, omnipotent yet pathetic and slavering in its weakness, omnipresent, but never where you want it to be. And I will never rest until my people are safe from it.'
- Earl Merther on the castle's laundry
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Re:Pierre La Or. The knighting of Jean. 9 Years, 1 Month ago
Thanks for the comments. Well Pierre is just getting started. I have yet to tackled a battle scene though that is the next story featuring Pierre. Anything you didn't like about the story?
Re:Pierre La Or. The knighting of Jean. 8 Years, 2 Months ago
Sir Pierre La Or,
I will admit at first I was worried that this would turn into another typical modern vampire narcissism festival. But in the end, your character reveals that he truly is a vampire, in all his dreadful and horrifying evil. I liked that a lot! I gave this story 4 stars, by which I meant it is very good. My only suggestion is that you break page 2 up into paragraphs(If I am remembering rightly).
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