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Written by Sir Pierre La Or   
Monday, 25 February 2008
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It did not take long for the Carrnon to let them in and already they had a feast waiting for them. Jean had notified them of his coming and they wanted to treat him good. He was their adopted son until Pierre took him for a squire. Pierre did not really get to know the Carrnon before. Pierre found Jean in his travels. Jean was escorting a caravan of goods to a fief on the outskirts of Mousillion, and Pierre offered him to be of service as squire after he saw the boy take out half a dozen orcs single handed. Jean wrote to the Carrnon and  they gave him permission. 

The peasant man at arm led them through the castle and into the great dinning hall. It was about fifteen feet tall and about the same wide. It was very elegant. On each wall two blue banners were hanged on each side with the family’s coat of arms. It was a raptor’s claw, painted yellow on blue background.  On the eastern and western walls two large glass windows were built in with the Lady painted on the western and the eastern a knight clad in blue tunic and armour, kneeling in prayer, his sword plunged on the earth and holding it tight. His helmet was removed and on the side. Pierre tried to make out what he could of the glass face. He appeared Brettonian with a hooked nose and full features. He had short blonde hair and a square chin. Pierre guessed that he was the founder of the Carrnon family. The torches on the stone walls made the hall seem like day and Jean offered Pierre a seat. “Ill go and see what’s taking them so long” he said to his master. Pierre grabbed Jean’s hand and made him sit down.” That is a job of a peasant. You are a knight Errant. Know your place.” He said and called for a peasant. Soon one arrived and bowed to him. “Get me the master of this place. He may have admitted me to his hall but he has not welcomed me here yet and that makes me irritated.” He said in a demanding, slightly loud voice. The servant ran off to find his master. “Mindless mortals” Jean could hear his master say as he let out a sigh. The Errant knew that his master did not need to breath but did so anyway. “To smell any ambushes in the air” he once told his squire.  The servant returned and with him came Sir Carrnon dressed in long blue robes, lined with fox fur and gold threats. He was in his early fifties and his face was square with fat cheeks and a strong, hardens, wrinkled outlook.  His hair was cut short and his blue eyes looked vibrant. He was a merchant. Pierre did not need to see the expensive gold rings on his fingers to understand it. He was not a knight. He did not have the weary of war. ‘I am sorry if I kept you waiting Lord Knight Pierre but you see my servanst are….’ He started in a deep voice but Pierre cut in. “You were late because you willed it. Not because you peasants were incompetent. Do not lie to me.”. Carrnon stared at his with a confusing look but after a while turned his gaze on Jean. “Jean my dear child” he said loudly and moved to him and embraced him. Jean was considerably taller than the noble but returned the embrace warmly. “Look at you all grown up. A knight Errant. Why I never thought I would see the day. How old are you now boy? He said and sat at one end of the wooden table on the centre of the hall. “ Em… I’ve seen winter 22 times now Sir” Jean replied and sat down next to his master when Carrnon gestured that he should take a seat. “And you serve under Sir La Or now?” he asked. “That’s right.” Pierre replied.” He is my squire and apprentice and I travel around with him on his adventures till I consider him responsible enough to become a knight of the realm.” Carrnon nodded. “And am I to understand that you will knight him? “ Carnnon asked. Pierre nodded.  Their talk was interrupted when a servant announced the entrance of Carrnon’s wife and daughters.  Carrnon’s wife, Lady Lucienta, made the first entranced and the daughters followed. The wife and the oldest daughter looked like identical twins although the Lucienta looked like an older version of her daughter. They both had a round face and full rosy cheeks, with large eyes, their colour a dazzling hazelnut and elegant eyebrows. All the men stood up and the daughter introduced herself as Marie. She looked around her mid-twenty’s with some excess weight and an untrained body and long blonde hair up to the shoulder plates. Obviously she was a spoiled child. The second daughter however, who introduced herself as Isabel, was a miracle of beauty. She has a tall, slender, fit and well-preserved body with nice curves, which Pierre was sure were not justified by the gown she wore, and an angelic face, with shallow cheekbones and a gaunt face. Her eyes were turquoise and her lips were small but full and red. She had long black to silver hair which reached up the middle of her back. She was Jean’s love and Pierre now understood why Jean was so obsessed with her. She was truly a sight to behold but Pierre knew that what needed to be should be done…

The banquet was well underway by the twenty second hour of the day.  Pierre observed and listened to the talk Jean had with the Carrnon and mostly with Isabel. They would talk of the most pointless events as if they were the grand ball at the King’s castle and would even dare stare on each other’s eyes when Carrnon was not paying attention. Everyone was enjoying their main course when the conversation finally turned to Pierre himself. “Tell us, Sir La Or, why the black armour? The only knights I know that bear the blackened armour are the ones of Mousillion but from what I gathered by the hilt of your sword you hail from Carcasson! Surely a tale is aloft on why the black armour is worn?” Carrnon questioned. Pierre pretended to wipe food from his mouth with a handkerchief and in his mind made a mental note to be on guard of this man’s perception. “This armour was created on a pack I made with my other questing companions when twelve, of the eighteen we were, perished in a battle against a Chaos war band. The rest were to bear this black armour as a mark of grief for the lives of our companions lost. . “ he said and stood up, removing his travelling cloak and revealing the armour in all its glorious detail. Silver dragons sprang from the shoulders, insignia and inscriptions made out of silver were curved on it and the names of the fallen of the back plate. He then wore the cloak again and took a seat.  “It was fashioned by the Fae themselves.” He said to Carrnon. Jan knew that to be a lie. He knew for a fact that the armour Pierre bore was blackened by Pierre himself and was blessed in blood and the Dark Lady’s praises. “The Fae you say? They say they are immortal. Have you ever meet them?” Lady Carrnon enquired. Pierre smiled; “No, I haven’t meet any of the fey. But I know that they not immortal. They get pierced by a lance as easily as a human. “Pierre said and leaned in closer to the table. “Vampires, now those are immortal” he said whispering in a mystical tone. Lord Carrnon simply scoffed but Lady Carrnon seemed fascinated and leaned in. “Have you  ever met any vampires Sir Lord La Or?” Lady Carrnon asked. Pierre smiled and Jran looked around nervously. “Yes my dear lady. I have fought such a creature and bested it into combat. It was one of the hardest battles I  fought. “Pierre said and paused. “And let me tell you something about vampires. The one I faced was as noble and honourable as I was” He said. Deep inside Pierre’s human part still screamed in horror of what he was about to do. Yet he knew that this was the only way for Jran to be knighted. Severing every link to their humanity and past was something Pierre did with all his children. Carrnon sighed “Vampires are not noble. Vampires are beasts. No matter how much they try to hide behind our rules of chivalry and their supposed nobility, they are nothing but vile parasites feeding on humanity. How do you even dare such a thing Grail Knight?” he said, stressing the word Grail as on an insult. Pierre stood up with flames in his eyes. He made for the hilt of his sword. eJan pushed his chair back and stood up in an attempt to reason with his master. He knew his master was easy to insult and knew that Lord Carrnon was in deep trouble. “Master….” Jean started but was interrupted by a strong slap on the cheek as Pierre slapped Jean to the ground and drew his sword. It was ancient, magical. Everyone felt it. Made out of pure silver and bearing inscriptions of ages past it vibrated in a bloody red colour. Jean tried to crawl up from the cobblestone ground but instead started coughing and spit blood. Isabel dashed to him as Pierre made way to Lord Carrnon himself. “What do I know about vampires you ask?” he said in a deep hissing tone, tilting his head from side to side and he steadily walked to Lord Carrnon who stood there petrified, shocked. “Why, I am one!” Pierre said and let out a cold dark laughter that filled the chamber and made Lady Carrnon and her daughter Marrie rush for the hall’s exit, screaming for guards. But Pierre had other plans. He pulled his cape and revealed his true identity. His red tunic was shown and the inscription on his armour and the gruesome dragon on his helmet, which at that moment was hanging from his belt above his left thigh, revealed what he truly was. But that was not enough. With a move Pierre magically closed the doors shut and came face to face with Lord Carrnon. He lowered his sword as Carrnon was breathing heavily and fast, clearly in a shock and Pierre came into eye contact. “ My virtue of chivalry is mixed with blood, beasts and darkness but it is more certainly upheld” he said while staring at Lord Carrnon and with a sudden violent attack, bit and tore Lord Carrnon’s neck open. He left Carrnon to chock on his own blood as he fell down, splattering the floor with blood. Pierre sheathed his sword and silently turned around to face the two women banging on the hall’s wooden doors screaming for help. “There there now. They breed you well I see. Like they fatten the swine before they take them to the slaughterhouse to be butchered for the next day’s festival” he uttered a look of complete madness and frenzy in his eyes.  He silently walked near them and enthralled them with a look. “It is of my oath never to hurt a damsel. And certainly not one who is in distress. But look at you! You disgust me. Pathetic overbreed nobility that doesn’t know where it’s true place lies. Now perish” he commanded and tore Lady Marie open with his sword that he unsheathed in a split second. “So you want to be immortal?” he asked as he turned his attention on Lady Lucienta. “P…Please…Please don’t hurt me…I will give you everything you want…’she said in a panicked look while looking around in a way of escape. There was no where to go. She knew that the monster had her cornered. “ Give me anything I want? My fair Lady there is nothing I would want from you….Apart from your blood” he said and with a swift move sunk his teeth on Lady Lucienta’s neck, sucking and smearing himself with blood. When he finally let go she dropped on the floor empty. Pierre then made a swift move and jumped on the table, and sat on the table opposite of Jean and Isabel and watched as Isabel tried to tend to Jean. “Ahh foolish young love. “he said with a mocking look on his face as Isabel faced him. She was kneeling over Jean and bend over and drew his sword.” I shall curve a hole in you. Foul liche” she said determined. “ Now now. That is no way for a lady to behave” he said. Isabel dashed to Pierre and made for his head in one mighty blow, screaming as she went. Pierre grabbed the sword with his palm and with a strong move made Isabel loosen her grip on it and tossed the sword across the room to the other side. He then grabbed both Isabel arms and forced her to sit next to him. She was struggling but against the strength of an ancient undead beast such as Pierre she had no hope. “Feisty little lady isn’t she Jean?” she asked. Jean turned to face him whilst lying on the floor. ”Why are you doing all this?”Jean screamed and spit more blood. Pierre’s face softened. He looked at his squire knight in ponder. “Why my dear Jean?” he asked back as he brought Isabel’s arms on his face, placing her soft wrists on his mouth.” The Dark Lady decided that it is time you are knighted. She wanted me to sever all you human links to the past. My dear Jean this is a new era for you.” he said coldly. He stood up, removed his belt from his tunic and tied Isabel’s hands to the foot of the table.  He then approached Jean and said. “ I hereby knight you. You shall be for now on be known as Sir Jan La Or. Knight of the Realm of the Barony of the La Or in Moussilion. Arise now Sir Jan and become a creature of the night. “ Pierre grinned and bit Jean. Darkness then engulfed Jan.



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Pierre La Or. The knighting of Jean. Mar 23 2008 21:37
This thread discusses the Content article: Pierre La Or. The knighting of Jean.

No comments so far? Did anyone read it?
Re:Pierre La Or. The knighting of Jean. Mar 23 2008 23:10
Quite a nice story, probably the longest first article ive seen submitted by anyone! Will try to give a more detailed opinion once I have re-read it
Re:Pierre La Or. The knighting of Jean. Mar 24 2008 16:09
I like it. It has a sort of difference to it. I quite enjoy some of the takes on Bret vampires, though there's a distinct lck of massive scenes of carnage and the like, despite that fact that a lot of Bretonnian vampires are Blood Dragons.
Re:Pierre La Or. The knighting of Jean. Mar 25 2008 09:41
Thanks for the comments. Well Pierre is just getting started. I have yet to tackled a battle scene though that is the next story featuring Pierre. Anything you didn't like about the story?
Re:Pierre La Or. The knighting of Jean. Mar 05 2009 19:51
Sir Pierre La Or,
I will admit at first I was worried that this would turn into another typical modern vampire narcissism festival. But in the end, your character reveals that he truly is a vampire, in all his dreadful and horrifying evil. I liked that a lot! I gave this story 4 stars, by which I meant it is very good. My only suggestion is that you break page 2 up into paragraphs(If I am remembering rightly).

---Gerard the Easterner


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